How's my driving?

I'd appreciate any suggestions on how to improve the way I play Malik. If I'm messing up somewhere, please do let me know, and if at all possible, point out how I could fix it or do better.

Thank you for your time.

Info on A Needle In A Haystack, the teashop, complete with an application form if you'd like to work there, with seperate threads for
All sorts of shop services as well as
A list of people currently employed there.

Info on the Asgard Assassin's Bureau,
with a handy list of people involved.

If you want your character affiliated with the Order and especially if you'd like your character to eventually become an assassin as well, this is a convenient place for anyone canonblind to find out what this is all about.